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Soul Survivor |
"Jumping Jack Flash" was fast asleep. It was early morning. He heard knocking on his front door. There was a girl yelling "Cant You Hear Me Knocking". Jack opened the door, and "She Smiled Sweetly". "Gimme Shelter" the woman said, so Jack let her in his house. Jack was hungry, so he told the woman to cook him something. He asked what her name was and she said it was "Angie".
Angie offered to make cookies, but Jack didnt have any "Brown Sugar", so she had to go the store to buy some. But Jack was upset, because she didnt return......
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See what happens next in Jumping Jack Flash Part2. |
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The Eggman |
No expections, Soul but that story was SAD SAD SAD
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ahhhhhh. sorry but I couldn't pass it up |
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Soul Survivor |
I know, Im tryin to improve it for part 2. |
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J.J.Flash |
Great Soul, but you could add this:
".....Jack was hungry, so he told the woman to cook him something. He asked what her name was and she said it was "Angie". So, Jack changed his mind and told to him: forget the food baby, give me little drink from your Loving Cup, I Just Want to make love to you"
What do you think my brother?]
Keep Rockin'!
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The Eggman |
Oh no no no it's great...i was just trying to be smart |
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Soul Survivor |
Right on |
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